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28 August 2007 @ 03:18 pm
Never Enough  
Title: Never Enough
Pairing: Nathan/Haley
Rating: Adult (NC-17)
Disclaimer: I don't own NH or One Tree Hill
Spoilers/Warnings: End of Season 3
Summary: Episode 322 Deleted Scene Extended
Author's Note: I would love feedback.

Their lips and arms were already attached to each other as they used their bodies to push open the door.  Once they were both inside and once the need for air became in issue Nathan pulled his lips from Haley’s.  It was almost painful to do so since it felt like days since he had really kissed her when it had only one day…even less.  He ran his hands down her arms so he could put his hands on either side of her waist and pull her closer him.  He then looked at her face, his bride’s face, his Haley’s face.  He’d never looked at anything so perfect.  And he knew he never would.

 

“I missed you late night…I was worried about you,” admitted Nathan with a little pout in his voice.  It’s true.  He had gotten very little sleep without Haley there next to him.  He had fought Haley tooth and nail about the whole sleeping apart the night before the Wedding thing until Haley, with Brooke and Peyton also arguing on her side, finally won. 

 

He wasn’t about to let Haley get away with a demand like that again since added to the very little sleep he got he had a horrible nightmare in which Haley drowned in.  Yeah, so sleeping apart or even being apart for any long length of time was nothing good and was something Nathan wasn’t going to allow again.

 

“Missed you, too.  And you’re still in trouble, how much did this wedding and this ring cost?” Haley pressed.

 

“None of your business,” Nathan pressed back trying not to show the little smile that was crossing his face.  Haley loved everything.  He knew it.  It was exactly everything she ever wanted but Haley still had to be Haley and think about the future and the pros and cons of something big like a Wedding.

 

“What if something comes up, something unexpected I mean this is all so….,” breathed Haley.

 

“What?  Long overdue!” Nathan said in a hard voice.  To him this is how everything should have been done the first time they wanted to get married.  Haley’s worried eyes met Nathan’s and he knew she agreed with him but she couldn’t erase the bit of anxiety she always had when it came to their future together.

 

“Look if something comes up we’ll deal with it then, but not today.  Today is your day.  Now what do you say we hang out here so I can kiss you for a couple hours,” Nathan said in his passionate come hither voice which he knew Haley could never resist.

 

“Hmm, sounds perfect…” said Haley.

 

Her words became muffled as Nathan crushed his hard lips to her ever so soft pouty lips.  He let their lips slide along each other for a good minute until he took his tongue and parted her lips so his tongue could invade her mouth and rub against her tongue.  A low aching moan slipped out of both their mouths as they extreamly enjoyed what their lips and tongues were doing.

 

With his hand still gripping either side of her waist Nathan pulled her even closer.  He pressed her so she was right up against every part of him.  Haley had been holding onto Nathan’s jacket but now that she was in Nathan’s hard grasp she moved her tiny hands and put them on his chest.  Had it really been just less than a day since Haley had tasted him?  The taste of him, smell of him, sometimes so strong and powerful that it made her forget things, things like Wedding Reception’s.  Their Wedding Reception which they were supposed to be at.  Even with that realization in the back of her head all she could focus on was the taste of Nathan and how her desire for more was increasing, more of his taste, more of him, her husband.

 

Nathan soon became aware of his and Haley’s need for air but he still kept her pressed up against him and his lips still moving against hers.  He had spent a whole 24 hours without her in his arms or her soft lips on his so he wasn’t going to waste a single second.  He would only break the kiss when he absolutely had to…which was now.

 

They were both breathing hard with their eyes closed, still enjoying the mini make-out session they had just went through.  Nathan leaned his head forward until his forehead was leaning against hers.

 

“Oh, Hales,” said Nathan as he let out a sigh.

 

Haley hadn’t removed her hands from his chest so she could feel his heart racing which wouldn’t have worried her before.  His heart always starts to race when they start these kinds of activities but his heart was racing quite a bit faster than was normal.  He was anxious or emotional about something.  There was definitely something more on his mind.

 

“What’s wrong, Nathan?”

 

“I need you.”

 

“I’m right here,” said Haley lifting one of her hands off his chest to stroke his cheek.

 

“No, I mean…I need to be with you…now.  I can’t wait until after the Reception and I certainly can’t wait until we get to London.  I have to be with you now.”

 

“Nathan, believe me I want you just as much as you want me but this is our first and last real Wedding Reception.  We can have all the sex we want when it’s over but…”

 

“It’s not about sex, Hales,” Nathan said cutting her off.  “Look ever since the shooting all I can think about is that we may not have as much time together as we may think.  And ever since the shooting it’s like I can’t get enough of you, of us being together.  I wasn’t lying when I said that I couldn’t stand it when we aren’t together.  It’s true.  Every minute we’re apart is painful.  The last 24 hours, last night was hell for me.  Do you understand?”

 

Haley’s brown eyes, glazed over with tears looked up to Nathan’s beautiful blue ones and without another thought she, with a certain smirk of her own, said, “The bathroom is right over there and it has a lock.”

 

*~ * ~ *

 

Brooke looked around the crowded Reception area until she spotted Mouth along with Lucas and Peyton checking out all the music.  Brooke stormed toward them and demanded, “Where are Nathan and Haley?”

 

Brooke looked from one clueless face to the next and started to whine, “No!  Their first dance is supposed to be going on like right now.”

 

Brooke put her head in her hands and Lucas moved from where he was standing to gather her in his arms.  He kissed her forehead and said in her ear so softly that she didn’t think Mouth or Peyton heard him, “You’ve done an amazing job today.  Everything is just as Hales has always dreamed so relax.  I’m sure Nathan and Haley will be here soon.”

 

There was a long silence between the four friends of the bride and groom before Mouth spoke up and said, “You guys don’t think…I mean what if they’re…”

 

“No, no, no don’t even say it,” said Lucas not giving Mouth a chance to finish.

 

“Well, they could be, I guess,” admitted Peyton.

 

“Oh, they better not be!” Brooke stated with absolutely no trace of a smile on her face.

 

* ~ * ~ *

 

As soon as Nathan had the door to the bathroom locked he picked up Haley and sat her down on the counter where he grabber her face and started eagerly kissing her just like before.

 

He pulled away only to latch onto her cheek.  He shimmered kisses down her neck to her shoulders where he pushed the strap of her wedding dress off her shoulder.  He went back to her neck and paid special attention to the area that always gave Haley so much pleasure.  Haley moaned as Nathan continued to suck on her neck and at the same time he reached around her to start lowering the zipper of her dress.

 

At the feel of her dress coming off Haley’s eyes snapped open, “Nathan…really…our Wedding…Reception.”

 

Nathan took her head between his hands and said, “Can wait.”  He then kissed her hard on the lips in the hopes that she would forget all about the Wedding Reception for the next…twenty minutes.  He went back to shimmering kisses down her cheek and to her neck and shoulders still trying at the same time to get her dress off.

“Nathan…our friends,” Haley could barley get out through all her moans.

 

“Are much more used to us running off to make love than even we are.”

 

“That’s true, I guess,” said Haley finally giving in.

 

And with that went all thought in Haley’s head of putting this off.  Haley felt the same way Nathan did.  Ever since that day in the tutor center she could never seem to get enough time with the young man who she wanted to spend the rest of her life with.

 

While Nathan was still trying to get the zipper of her dress down Haley pushed of Nathan’s jacket and started on the buttons of his shirt.  It wasn’t long before Haley was nibbling on Nathan’s neck while running her hands up and down his bare chest.

 

Nathan finally had Haley’s dress pushed down to around her waist and her bra off so he picked her up off the counter and laid her gently on the ground.  This wasn’t going to be the most comfortable lovemaking session ever but it would do.  Nathan leaned over Haley and took a moment to look deep into her eyes before he captured her lips in another mind blowing kiss.  He took one of his hands and started to massage one of her bare breast.

 

Haley winced at the sudden tenderness of her breast and she was surprised how Nathan didn’t ask and she didn’t tell him…he just knew by looking at her face that he needed to be gentler than ever.  He started to massage both her breast now and before Haley knew it he had one nipple in his mouth and was very lightly sucking on it.  Haley started to moan again as she closed her eyes.  Nathan went from one breast to the other giving Haley such pleasure that one tear escaped her eye just as Nathan’s name fell from her lips.

 

Nathan released the nipple he was sucking on and placed long gentle kisses on her belly before he was up and kneeling at Haley’s feet.  Nathan knew how rough Haley could get during their lovemaking so he made sure to remove he shoes and his shirt which had already been unbuttoned.  He slid his hands gently and slowly up her legs until he came upon Haley’s already very damp panties.  Nathan put one of his hands between her legs and enjoyed the feel of her warmth.  Haley’s eyes were still closed, still enjoying the feel of Nathan’s hands on her skin.  Before Haley knew it her panties were being pulled down her legs until they were pulled off completely.

 

“Nathan…please,” pleaded Haley as she began to part her legs for him while never losing eye contact with him.

 

Nathan shoved his pants and boxers off and layed directly above Haley where he kissed her forehead, her cheeks, her nose, and finally her lips.  Nathan could feel Haley’s frustration so while deepening the kiss even more by plunging his tongue into her mouth he slide himself into her in one long thrust.

 

“Nathan!”  It was definitely a good thing Nathan removed his cloths because he wanted to feel what she was feeling…he wanted to feel her grab onto his arms, shoulders, and back with all the strength she could muster.

 

“Nathan…more…harder!”

 

“Come with me, Hales.”

 

Once Nathan found a perfect rhythm Haley matched it and before they knew it they were both falling over the edge, yelling and moaning each other’s name.

 

They lay there together all sweaty and trying to return their breathing to normal.  Nathan was on his back and Haley turned to look at him.

 

“What?”

 

“Nothing.  I just can’t get enough of this.”  Haley put her hand over Nathan’s.  “And this.”  Haley then put her hand on Nathan’s face and pulled him toward her in another soft gentle kiss.

 
 
 
babyjamesisminebabyjamesismine on August 29th, 2007 11:02 pm (UTC)
Sorry I didn't reply sooner I just didn't get a chance to read this sooner.

Usually I'm not a huge fan of the racy stuff but I read this anyway and it was definitely cute! I definitely think NH sooooo did it in that little period before going to the reception haha.

As far as constructive criticism, if you want any ;) haha um the part with LPBM was cute, but kind of left on a cliffhangerish note...it wasn't really super necessary, although I do appreciate the BL tidbit ;) it would have made more sense if you then went back to them in the end to see how the gang reacts to finding out what happened and stuff...just a thought. And also at the beginning some word choice like..one sentence you said tongue 3 times, so just wording it a bit differently would make it sound better. But overall the writing is good. :)

But I loved the ending. =D

Overall, good job!
Tracy: Brooke & Haley{girl I love}totruelove on August 29th, 2007 11:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for the honest review, Jackie! *hugss* I know it wasn't my best work..trust me it wasn't. And LPBM...I was going to bring them in at the end but I kinda thought that people want NH fics to be all about NH. I think I was trying to write for others than write for myself. Thanks again hun!
babyjamesisminebabyjamesismine on August 29th, 2007 11:27 pm (UTC)
Nah I know what you mean! Lots of NH fans are *ahem* picky...and they are very skittish about that kind of stuff, I'm not one of those fans who minds necessarily so I know what you mean/were trying to do. And hey it's the first thing I read by you so I wouldn't know if its your best or not but it wasn't bad at all I promise! Gosh I haven't written fic in forever, but I definitely know I like some pieces more than others so hey it's all good...writing is a process..you improve as you go so no worries =)
Shauna Nicolestarlite_diner on August 30th, 2007 01:07 am (UTC)
Hey sweetie! *huggles*

I'm really, really sorry I didn't get a chance to respond before, but I read your fic and I just LOVED it!

I just PMed you on FF with some feedback!! ;) :D
(Anonymous) on September 3rd, 2007 11:06 pm (UTC)
wow that was really good write more!
Tracy: Alexistotruelove on September 8th, 2007 08:36 am (UTC)
Thanks SO much! : )
Berry: Eclipse chooseberrymcgregor on September 7th, 2007 06:55 pm (UTC)
Aww, that was just great. After seeing the deleted scene, in my head they absolutely had sex just before going back to the ceremony, and I love you for writing this! It was awesome. :)
Tracy: Claire{happy}totruelove on September 8th, 2007 08:39 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! *hug* You have no idea how much it helps me write more when I know people enjoy my fics. :D
Diane: NH ~ Wedding day looks (deleted scene)bluelilyrose on September 8th, 2007 09:26 pm (UTC)
Sorry for not reading and fb'ing this sooner.

Firstly, I love that you wrote something for this particular scene, especially as I don't think any other authors have touched it. The cute, flirtatious banter was very in character for both Nathan and Haley and the love scene was just perfect.

The scene with LPBM was pretty funny, particularly when they realised just what NH might be up to.

Thanks for writing and sharing! :)

Tracy: Nathan & Haley{kiss}totruelove on September 8th, 2007 10:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback, Diane! To have someone like you say such nice things about my writing really means a lot. It makes me want to write more and share all of my fics. :D